Celebrating the talents of children in Literacy and Numeracy
Tuesday, October 13, 2009
Caitlin's Holiday Story
Over the holidays, me, my Mum and my cousin went to the pools. I took my goggles. I went under water, my Mum was watching me and my cousin. I was excited when we went to the pools because I saw my Dad in the Gym. I was playing with a baby and she was only a one year old. I was there for two whole hours. I had pink goggles and my cousin had black goggles. After that I had a shower. We went to the park. Then we went home and played volley ball.
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Hi Caitlin,
You have written a great story about what you did in the holidays. I really enjoy going to the pools at Parakai. Have you been there? Which pools did you go to?
Keep up the great writing and I look forward to seeing more of your writing.
Miss Lavakula
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