Friday, May 7, 2010

Atlanta's recount on the Waitakere Dam Trip




Atlanta had a great time when she went to the Waitakere (Nihotupu) Dam. She liked the train ride and enjoyed looking at the wetas and glow worms.


8 comments:

The whole school said...

Dear Atlanta,

We liked how you used expression in your voice.
Well done and keep up the good work.

From the whole school! ;)

Richard said...

Hi Atlanta,
I heard your podcast and I liked how you used your voice.
From Richard.

Anonymous said...

Hi Atlanta I love your work. you had heaps of expression in your work.
keep it up from savannah.

Lavinia said...

Dear Atlanta
I like how you used expression in your sentence.
keep up the good work.

Atlanta said...

Dear Richard, Savannah and Lavinia,

Thank you for commenting on my work. I feel I am getting better at podcasting.

From Atlanta

Atlanta said...

Dear Richard, Savannah and Lavinia,

Thank you for commenting on my work. I feel I am getting better at podcasting.

From Atlanta

Vincent said...

Hi Atlanta,

You spoke clearly and used expression. Keep up the good work.

From Vincent

Anonymous said...

Hi James,

I like your green hulk story.
Well done!
from Atlanta