Monday, September 13, 2010

Atlanta's long green grass Haiku poem


Check out Atlanta's green grass poem.


6 comments:

Harry and vincent said...

Hi Atlanta.

We liked how you spoke clerly


From Harry and vincent

Maki and John said...

Hi Atlanta,
I liked your haiku poem John and Maki thought that you had a clear voice in your move.I liked how you used expression.




From
Maki and John

Isobel and Madeleine said...

Dear Atlanta,
We love your haiku. We like how you did it on green grass. We also like how you had a clear voice.
From Isobel and Madeleine.

Anonymous said...

Hi Atlanta

we liked your yellow poem
from Zeba and Latham.

Anonymous said...

hi Atlant
I like

Anonymous said...

HI Atlanta
i like uyr poem





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