Dear Zeba, I think you must've worked really hard at your school because you did really well when you thought of ideas for your haiku. I liked it how you had 5 syllables, then 7 syllables and then 5 syllables. From Queenie and Oli.
Kia ora koutou My name is Naketa Ikihele. I have just stumbled across your blog after looking at the Manaiakalani website. I just wanted to leave a comment to say that I am thoroughly enjoying reading your Haiku poems. I teach early childhood teachers how to use digital technologies , so will be sending them the link to your great blog. Thank you so much for sharing.
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Dear Zeba,
I think you must've worked really hard at your school because you did really well when you thought of ideas for your haiku. I liked it how you had 5 syllables, then 7 syllables and then 5 syllables.
From Queenie and Oli.
Hi Queenie and Oli,
Thanking for leaving me a comment. I found writing the Haiku poem, but I am pleased with what I've written.
From Zeba
Hi Zeba,
I like your
flower story
it was very good,
keep up the good work!
from Atlanta.
hi zeba
I like your green haiku poem keep up the good work
from loisi
Kia ora koutou
My name is Naketa Ikihele. I have just stumbled across your blog after looking at the Manaiakalani website. I just wanted to leave a comment to say that I am thoroughly enjoying reading your Haiku poems. I teach early childhood teachers how to use digital technologies , so will be sending them the link to your great blog.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Hi Naketa,
Thank you for leaving a comment on our blog. We think your blog is awesome and very soon we will be making a comment on it.
From Room 3 Panmure Bridge School
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