This is Najib's recount writing on making Chocolate Crackles.
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Last Friday our whole class worked together and we each had jobs to do.
First we all washed our hands then put all the paper cases on a plate. Liam and Sanujan and Aung Naing put the paper cups onto the plate.
Then we measured the rice bubbles. Alaree’o, Tai, Joel and Riley had the fun job of measuring the four cups of rice bubbles
Nyjah measured the icing sugar. Shailah measured the coconut. Joshua poured the kremelta.
We counted from one to ten during mixing the ingredients.
Alaree’o, Taylor, Kohatu and Shailah took the chocolate crackles to the fridge.
After lunch I was excited when Miss Paton got the chocolate crackles out of the fridge. They were yum. They tasted delicious. The chocolate crackles were crunchy and cold.